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    dots Submission Name: AT THIS MOMENT (FIVE MINUTES AGO)dots
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    Author: Psyve
    ASL Info:    53/M/ Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 75/102/60
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAT THIS MOMENT (FIVE MINUTES AGO)dots
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    at this moment
    five minutes ago,
    there were a number of things
    i wanted to say-
    but i thought
    i’d save them for
    later,
    and merely send
    three
    points of view…
    tell me
    what you think of them
    on the twenty-fifth,
    if your .0001% chance
    comes through-
    thanks
    for yours
    of the tenth-
    love,
    me.
    (12:40 a.m.)




    Submitted on 2006-06-09 01:33:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      for some reason, as random as it seemed at first, it kind of fell into place, altho I have no idea what you're talking about...X_x
    I really like it, but I have no idea why....
    freaky O_o
    (maybe it's because I'm tired and it's 4am...)
    keep up the random awesomeness ^_~
    <3
    Rose
    | Posted on 2006-06-09 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]


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