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Author: nuttyginna
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I wrote this to remind everyone that we all die-but it's not as bad as you think. We lose people close to us, but they will always live in our hearts and when you do die, you will be reunited with all those you've lost, and your memory will live on through your children and friends. Hope you enjoy!


When death comes
knocking at your door
do you fight,
Til you can fight no more?

Do you have grace
Is your head up high
Or do you just
break down and cry?

Do you beg the lord,
for one more line,
or just accept
that now's your time.

Some time soon
He will knock on your door,
You can't escape him-
You can run no more.

So when death arrives you,
and you bleed-
Know in your heart-
You're special to me.

You will be strong,
and brave and true,
You have the grace
to get you through.

So when he comes knocking
at your door,
You will be here
Forever more.

There will be memories,
There will be tears,
And you will live on
For hundreds of years.

Submitted on 2006-06-09 07:15:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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