Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: ONLY IN THE NIGHTdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Psyve
    ASL Info:    53/M/ Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 75/102/60
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 927
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 762



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsONLY IN THE NIGHTdots
    -------------------------------------------



    I know there are things you cannot tell me in the evening,
    When the shadows lengthen, chasing out the light:
    Then, for the trembling to be quelled,
    My baby must be held,
    Still, I wish you didnít just need me in the nightÖ

    And, when the morning sun has chased your nightmares all away,
    And has put an end to your nocturnal flight,
    Fortified by light,
    You donít need me in your sight:
    Oh, babe, how come you only need me in the night?

    So, baby, baby, hold me through this morning,
    And Tiny, wonít you stay until twilight?
    Please donít go away,
    If I donít make it through the day
    Oh baby, howíre you going to make it through the night?




    Submitted on 2006-06-09 15:26:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      this was great psyve. i get the feeling that you have wrote about her before, though. the woman resembles "faded blue jeans" and "best of friends" i don't know if this is the same person but still this was great.

    the part i liked the most was the last stanza when you ask how she will go on when you leave and i think you did a good job of asking that.

    sorry my comment is all scattery brained and all over the place.

    -kiddow :D
    | Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by the nerdbomb | [ Reply to This ]
      X3 love the end. And, I wish I could write more, but... *showers with praise* I am falling asleeeeeep... I just wanted to check out some of your other stuff. Think I'm gonna stalk you, or something. Something. :D~ Coraz Windy
    | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    106541

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Promise written by annie0888
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Bond written by saartha
    This written by Chelebel
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Push written by JanePlane
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry