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    dots Submission Name: HOLLA if you remember Me!dots
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    Author: bluepifany
    ASL Info:    27/F/Phoenix Arizona
    Elite Ratio:    4.3 - 174/147/33
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHOLLA if you remember Me!dots
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    Theoretical Metaforical Representation
    (OF myself-FOR myself-TO myself)

    Past vs. Future

    intake(perception)interpretation
    personality views
    multilateral
    prophecy(forecast)predictable=redundant
    Why did you choose me?
    is it enough to be chosen?
    repurcussion of past
    dealings with momentary positioning
    forgetfulness (lessons) of-from-simultaneous(maybe?) the past

    battles of all battles(to determine what?)
    Fighting your own self never got you anywhere(toconsumeonesselfwiththeyself)
    foothold power plants the deepest root

    Shit is boring.......over it......Remember beliefs(rooted in desire)
    (Repetitivenessboringnothingness)




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