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    Author: BlueHeart
    ASL Info:    14/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 14/24/19
    Words: 381
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
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       I wrote this as a blog, then I though it might be some kind of artwork lol, so here it is


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    I've been thinking a lot. Almost too much. You shouldn't think all day, but I do. I think in my sleep even. And when I think, I ponder very deeply. Very, very deeply. And today I have pondered something valuable.

    Relationships are like strings, connections in the mind. In a relationship there is more than just Point A to Point B. The string is not held straight, even, and perfect. in a good relationship there a knicks and knots in the string. There's more than just a straight perfect line. There are memories among the string and past events that are cherished in the relationship.

    Then I thought some more. What can we do to string? Well, we can cut it. When we cut our relationship with a person, it's as if all those memories are still there, but so far away. You may begin an altercation with the person that may be ended, and may not. If the altercation is ended and the two make up then what can we do? We tie the string togther again to make another knot in the strand of life.

    And this is where I thought of something I use a lot in my blog. The threads of fate. Maybe you find someone special that you love, and cherish enough that they are added to your life, therefore tieing one more line to your string. You string has many connections of friends, and lovers on it but it's still your string.

    From your string other strings emerge, and other strings from that. These are the threads of fate in which we meet people by. It is our destiny to incline into these threads of fate, because if we don't give into fate, destiny will forsaken us. We don't realize that we always have destiny until the end of life, and anything could happen to anyone. We all really are connected by the threads of fate. One person knows another, and they know 2 more and it continues. All those strings lead back to your string. Think of it, we really all are connected.

    It's strange really, thinking about it. Connection is the key to the world, and yet it is right infront of us




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      creepy. i love randoom thoughts more than i love poetry i think... weird to say. but more comes out when youre just waxing poetic instead of trying to force every bit of feeling into lines, and rhymes when all you want is for someone to feel what you feel and its so hard to be good enough and to write it the way everyone has come to think you should..the question is why am i ranting about this now? dunno..just came to mind..but yea..i agree with the connections ...thats how epidemics start.
    | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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