this poem just...WOW!
you are AMAZZZIIINNGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you should check out some of my stuff.
its real deep.
you would like it alot.
my work reminds me of yours too much.
its like we are the same person.
i feel every ounce of strong firey emotion you poored into this poem.
i especially feel a strong inclination toward the yeahs in the poem. i say yeah alot so i really know where you are coming from.
you did every thing wonderfully.
you are the next shakespear.
the descritpion is a relief.. its not horrible. just not spectacular, and normally id do the polite critique not really stating opinion just trying to support and be helpful but today im in the mood for something amazing.