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    dots Submission Name: Enoughdots
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    Author: Sagirlie
    ASL Info:    16/F/Essex
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 48/39/24
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 147
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 388



    Description:
       This is about how I felt when my friend and I had a massive fight.


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    Isn’t it enough?
    I’ve cried for you
    Screamed in frustration
    Shaken in fear

    Isn’t it enough?
    I can’t forget the insults
    The cruel words replay
    They dominate my thoughts

    Isn’t it enough?
    You made the message clear
    I know you hate me
    And now I hate you too

    Isn’t that enough?




    Submitted on 2006-06-10 11:40:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's simple but I like it, lots of poems are crowded with alot of themes and metaphors, this gets to the point and the repitition makes your one theme very clear. ~Sunset
    | Posted on 2006-07-02 00:00:00 | by sunset | [ Reply to This ]
      i hope this isn't the same freind that inspired the pther poem.. if so this isn't the kindof relatioship that you should be a part of..
    as for the poem, I like that you repeated the last part with isn't it enough....
    | Posted on 2006-06-10 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      .. was thinking about the same thing mimi asked you about.. the way you write is simply.. to the point you write the way i think.. its amasing but dont let poor friendships effect you to much.. its easy to say hard to do
    | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by Litch | [ Reply to This ]



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