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    dots Submission Name: True to youdots

    Author: Sagirlie
    ASL Info:    16/F/Essex
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 48/39/24
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 978
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 385


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    dotsTrue to youdots

    Iím not perfect
    I donít pretend to be
    Iím not going to change
    Iím going to be me

    Look in the mirror
    Be proud of who you are
    Donít be someone different
    Yourself will get you far

    Youíll never be happy
    Until you are true
    Release the weight from your shoulders
    And be the real you

    Submitted on 2006-06-10 12:00:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yay! This was good. I totally believe in the "be yourself not others" thing. Prolly why I still say "dude" a lot. Who knows but anyways,. The poem states something that needs to be spread around more. No more wannabes or copy cats. Everyone should be the same, not follow tide. Simple message, good poem . I liked it. Keep writing!

    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by Razing_Fire | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this poem... simple... and straight to the point, the message is good....
    i personally dont think any one should change the way they are for anybody or anything.. and i like wat u've done by bringing this message out in poetry... cheers

    | Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, sweet, to the point, easy read. Lovely. Keep writing. I'm a fan of that style of poetry.
    | Posted on 2006-06-10 00:00:00 | by Karynmrm | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really good poem, it's very powerfull and clear. It's the kind of thing that many people think but not often say...or at least to others but themselves. Great job putting it into words, the rhyme is awsome and makes the poem flow really well.
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by xana | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the message in the poem. I think that more and more people need to realise that what u are saying is true. So many clones are out there trying to fit in, but they all look like idiots if u ask me.
    Love the poem
    Luv ya, take care
    | Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by Wingless Fairy | [ Reply to This ]
      That was really good. I think that is a message that really needs to be sent around. Be yourself. It was very easy to read.
    | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by Jenny441 | [ Reply to This ]

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