yay! This was good. I totally believe in the "be yourself not others" thing. Prolly why I still say "dude" a lot. Who knows but anyways,. The poem states something that needs to be spread around more. No more wannabes or copy cats. Everyone should be the same, not follow tide. Simple message, good poem . I liked it. Keep writing!
i like this poem... simple... and straight to the point, the message is good.... i personally dont think any one should change the way they are for anybody or anything.. and i like wat u've done by bringing this message out in poetry... cheers
This is a really good poem, it's very powerfull and clear. It's the kind of thing that many people think but not often say...or at least to others but themselves. Great job putting it into words, the rhyme is awsome and makes the poem flow really well.
I like the message in the poem. I think that more and more people need to realise that what u are saying is true. So many clones are out there trying to fit in, but they all look like idiots if u ask me. Love the poem Luv ya, take care
Submission Name: True to you
. I liked it. Keep writing!