A gun pops
And now the party is done
we yell and scream
Oh shit, here comes the S.W.A.T. team
They yell, "Get down!!!"
Now we're kissing the ground
Handcuffs on my wrist
They only got them on me threw an arm twist.
Nice, I really haven't read a poem like this before...it was very intense, to be honest with you....The last line was somewhat confusing to me, though...I'm not sure, but I think you meant "through" and not "threw" as in throwing something....This was nice, don't get me wrong...but it felt unfinished to me, I want more...you might want to consider adding more to it.
Wow I actually understood this poem, even though short, it got to the point of this so called story. The rhyming and tone of this flow like water. I thought "Now we're kissing the ground" was quite commical.