To create such a large blank page, it took energy from your right (or left) arm/hand/finger to press the enter/return key. All the while you were pressing you must have been thinking. And...were you pressing slowly? How about intermittently, you know, like windshield wipers? Was there any anger involved? How about time? How long did it take for you to create such a vast amount of empty space?
Quite frankly...since I have been blessed with an artistic side...I find this piece quit alluring. It has a thought provoking flavour to it. From where I sit...I see potential. Now, had you made the space extremely small...I would have been more likely to relate to the title of your "write." To be bored encites monotony...a wearisome piece...even humdrum. However, you have actually instigated four comments out of a large amount of "nothing." Therefore, although you managed to produce merely a blank sheet of virtual paper...you have actually provoked thought through your "readers." Well done, in a symbolic sort of way...
Perhaps next time, you might share what it is that makes life so boring... Hugs...Kimmy
Boring isn't always a bad thing. Always having somthing to write about is a gift, but not all gifts are blessings', however not all curses are without reward.
i dont see a blank page as boring. i see it as potential for something great. see, that's thinking outside of the box. boring is only as boring as you allow it to be.
Hm...well this was interesting..and to answer your question, I don't see anything..but a blank page..so what if your life is boring, the thing that people write about most is pain, do you want that? I think not..its not the best feeling..I'd rather feel nothing at all, than to feel something hurtfull..And not everyone can write something all the time, writers block, maybe? Anywho, um..nice piece? Good title at least. Take Care.
What is boring but a lack of action? boring is such a negative word. perhaps your life is just "activly challanged"? a slump is not forever and i know there are times that my life is far too cluttered with meaningless and trivial duties and comittments to allow me time to think so the dull times are for re-charging batteries. maybe to balance this poem you need one that conveys the busy-ness of your life at times.
work play chat drive read think live survive be comit respond blink never slow alert step watch react breath stare blurt .........
Hmm thats kinda fun.....IT WAS MY IDEA FIRST! Back Off!... Just kidding whatever, this is just taking up space really so i'll go before i start rambling....
I have to agree with "dismentled"....not all gifts are blessings, I think the blank page is funny, but you have to look at the glass as half full, one day, you will be wishing for those days you had nothing to do, until that time, write about all the things you have time to do, or wish to do, fill the page, life isnt all that bad :)....oddly so I kind of enjoyed the write, or lack there of.
Submission Name: my life is boring
