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    dots Submission Name: 17-47-9dots
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    Author: Robbing Hood
    ASL Info:    16/m/Ark
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/35/10
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Childrens
    Total Views: 598
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 584



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    1, 2, now lets just skip to the N9ne/
    the kings r back, and just in time/
    back with power of 47 of u new jacks/
    power to make ur bars lay flat/
    when i say bars im refferin to lines/
    the lines that refer to time/
    time before u enter the other line/
    the line thats also reffered to as the stair way to heaven/
    17-47/
    9 shots end ur current state, aka livin/
    i got an L & a R on the hat thats fittin/
    itll be the last thing that comes into vison/
    before u realize what the games been missin/




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