must be nice (verse 2)
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must be nice (verse 2)
It must be nice having someone to hold Growing old and you still love em after the years have taken their toll It’s so nice to have a lover who can joke and laugh Memories come rushing back as I stare at your photograph The feelings, I keep trying to hold em back You said “I love you” And I try not to remember how it felt when you told me that Going through this lonely act, pretending I’m over it Real Unknown Soldier shit since we’re in a war for our hearts Trying to spar with the sharks who try to devour us from the start But it’s a useless effort since we just grown further apart It must be nice to reach that level of dedication Cuz the relationship gets higher expectations Maybe Love sent a delegation to make me jealous of those on the higher elevations I desire the revelations to reveal the concealed desperation And maybe I can deal with this hesitation Cuz it’s not nice, feeling that you’re lacking the love Cuz after the hugs the kisses fade too So the love that once made you Can do the exact opposite of what it did to create you Is it an epiphany or is this feeling confusing me Stuck sitting here thinking just how nice it used to be Even when your life is going wrong She’ll be by your side still holding on Even when those 20s stop spinning And all those gold digging women disappear She’ll still be here |
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damn man, its like your taking the words out of my mout or some ish, you know........ Im definitly gonna read verse three...| | Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ] | aaw bubz this was lovely,who knew a soldier could be so soft, i loved it i dont know what else to say, it flowed nice and it sent a tinglin sensation up my back whilst reading it for some strange reason, | keep em cummin babe kyrenia | Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ] | u a fag real [censored] | | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ] | this is really sweet!!! crap jess commented on like 2 more than me dammit!! ok! i think troy has been shot by cupid! hehehee! | ~akaila~ good job! | Posted on 2006-07-12 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ] | This was a little bit harder than the first one. I think you did a fine job spitting out these tight lines. The flow was good and so was your choice of words. It was not as good as the first one, but it was still very good. Another fav. | Catrina | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ] | Dammit man....okay check this out.....I'll get my keyboard out....and start up the Pro Tools....and you can do any remix that you like....and I'll bump it! | You are carrying on your rugged ways with this touch of Lyfe himself. Who is in his rugged ways in a R & B way. I can really picture a duet of Lyfe and an emcee. The lyrics that you are putting down are very deep. A longing of what once was.....which shall never be again......must be nice to have that one thing that is special to hold onto forever. I'm feelin you pimpin......so long I have yearned for that permanent placement..... Once again.....Li Li applauds! Much love, Li Li | Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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