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must be nice (verse 2)

Author: unknown soldier
ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 1348 /1346 /203
Words: 260
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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must be nice (verse 2)

It must be nice having someone to hold
Growing old and you still love em after the years have taken their toll
It’s so nice to have a lover who can joke and laugh
Memories come rushing back as I stare at your photograph
The feelings, I keep trying to hold em back
You said “I love you”
And I try not to remember how it felt when you told me that
Going through this lonely act, pretending I’m over it
Real Unknown Soldier shit since we’re in a war for our hearts
Trying to spar with the sharks who try to devour us from the start
But it’s a useless effort since we just grown further apart
It must be nice to reach that level of dedication
Cuz the relationship gets higher expectations
Maybe Love sent a delegation to make me jealous of those on the higher elevations
I desire the revelations to reveal the concealed desperation
And maybe I can deal with this hesitation
Cuz it’s not nice, feeling that you’re lacking the love
Cuz after the hugs the kisses fade too
So the love that once made you
Can do the exact opposite of what it did to create you
Is it an epiphany or is this feeling confusing me
Stuck sitting here thinking just how nice it used to be

Even when your life is going wrong
She’ll be by your side still holding on
Even when those 20s stop spinning
And all those gold digging women disappear
She’ll still be here

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  damn man, its like your taking the words out of my mout or some ish, you know........ Im definitly gonna read verse three...
| Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
  aaw bubz this was lovely,who knew a soldier could be so soft, i loved it i dont know what else to say, it flowed nice and it sent a tinglin sensation up my back whilst reading it for some strange reason,
keep em cummin babe
| Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
  u a fag real [censored]
| Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
  this is really sweet!!! crap jess commented on like 2 more than me dammit!! ok! i think troy has been shot by cupid! hehehee!
good job!
| Posted on 2006-07-12 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a little bit harder than the first one. I think you did a fine job spitting out these tight lines. The flow was good and so was your choice of words. It was not as good as the first one, but it was still very good. Another fav.

| Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
  Dammit man....okay check this out.....I'll get my keyboard out....and start up the Pro Tools....and you can do any remix that you like....and I'll bump it!

You are carrying on your rugged ways with this touch of Lyfe himself. Who is in his rugged ways in a R & B way. I can really picture a duet of Lyfe and an emcee. The lyrics that you are putting down are very deep. A longing of what once was.....which shall never be again......must be nice to have that one thing that is special to hold onto forever. I'm feelin you long I have yearned for that permanent placement.....

Once again.....Li Li applauds!

Much love,

Li Li
| Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]

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