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The fool the role play of problem

Author: H.Redd
ASL Info:    28/m/ lake charles
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Words: 152
Class/Type: Poetry /Mirror or Mask
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stoping playing the fool to many drinks last night that i went out of control

The fool the role play of problem

The wine last nigth took my mind to a place were i have forgotten about. This moring after the pain, what i have done leaves me cover up in all of this shame. Looking for respect but only showing the way that i have sin. The new sorrow makes the wine taste sour. These diamond lies wrap in ghetto true the red one how could you be so foolish. You are nothing more then what you have make out of yourself. Role playing this situation looking for deff, i don't want to be seen by any body else. Let the night steal the day and give hope a twist there is nothing much more i would like and to get out of this. Smelling like the last chance so bring on the doom. I am in love with role playing , i am just a role playing fool.

Submitted on 2006-06-11 17:41:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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