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    dots Submission Name: Downy wings holdingdots
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    Author: ladyngold
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 585/520/99
    Words: 10
    Class/Type: Haiku/Religious
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    Description:
       This written in Haiku format minus the nature theme...I call it a Hybrid


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    dotsDowny wings holdingdots
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    Downy wings holding
    her flying soaring, higher
    royalty ascends




    Submitted on 2006-06-11 22:24:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hybrid Haiku (bless-u)?
    Well, I will have to agree. It is not truely about nature, but it is worded so that the reader finds hints of nature around the smooth and soft edges of the words. I like it Cheryl. And I like the pictures it puts into my head.


    Well done as always.
    thanks for sharing.


    *walks away thinking, "Dang...just when I get haiku (bless-u) down...Cheryl creates this hybrid.*

    *smiles and thinks...She's pretty darn cool.*


    Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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