Mr. Tornado

Author: Nightraven ASL Info:    25/m/Poland Elite Ratio:    4 - 276 /321 /79 Words: 119

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Mr. Tornado

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there he comes gonna blow us all stand up, bow jump before you fall our houses stand still stand like they stood the trees get torn out he's in lousy mood make me feel like I'm real that's the only deal I can feel the cold wind's blow hello mr. Tornado hello mr. Tornado say hello break the walls throw the cows catch a truck make them fly like crows close the door ain't enough to be? count from ten you're gonna fly like Dorothy you better show me something new something that I will not live through spiral of wind playing it's show hello mr. Tornado hello mr. Tornado say hello

Submitted on 2006-06-12 05:05:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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you know this song is nice and all... but it somehow gives me the feeling that the protagonist in this song would like to die. you know first he's like the tornado's coming he'll destroy everything, and then the house are still standin, then the chorus is like mr. tornado makes him feel real, you know makes him feel like he's alive, and then in the second chorus he's like show me something that'll kill me, i'm tired of almost dying, but not really. i don't know. that's how i interpret it. it's a cry for death. and the tornado is just a symbol for it. it's amazing how few good pieces of literature there actually are on this site. this is one.

| Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by Zu | [ Reply to This ]

This is really good I Love the way you brought this together And yes this could easioly be transferred into a song beautifully Incidently my Family is From your Next door neighbor Lithuania Please keep in touch We probably have a lot of stories to share God Bless Ron Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron

| Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

^________^ YAY *tackles* It's great to see lyrics from you... or perhaps it's great to see me actually online and reviewing solidly for more than two days in a row? :D~ The point is... this is adorable! X3.... okay... maybe not adorable. But I like how you really give the tornado a personality, and there's enough hints that it could possibly be a metaphor... but that's not certain either. I love it. :DD i'ts simple enough to be a sweet, enjoyable song; but complicated enough to make you think. Yay~ Coraz

| Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]

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