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    dots Submission Name: back to realitydots
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    Author: DaRaven
    ASL Info:    25 Male Ontario
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 28/58/42
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsback to realitydots
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    I thought nobody knew but me, but the more

    I figured it was hidden the more it became

    revealed. Oh this treacherous disease of

    mine how i loath thee, yet i cannot seem to

    arrest thee, its like a powerful entity, it

    will not let me free, I am unable to see

    beyond the water stream, Drifted a float

    too far I see.This day in the dream is not

    what it seems, Its not being free but too

    little of gleam. So back into the stream of

    life like a bee, Its not easy to see but

    easy to dream.






    Submitted on 2006-06-12 13:39:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was interesting. I'm not really sure what it means...but I liked it because it was different. I don't read many like this.

    Kris
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by Raindrops | [ Reply to This ]


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