PARTING SONG -------------------------------------------
Why is it that I must always end the things I start?
And why am I the only one who takes these things to heart?
And why is it that you don’t feel a part of what I feel?
And can you tell me if my hurt is real?
Why is it I always give much more than I intend?
And why am I the one who always gets hurt in the end?
And why is it that I’m the one who must apologize?
And why is there no sadness in your eyes?
Like most of my lyrics on this board, this one was originally written as a song and, should you care to, you can hear me perform it by clicking on the link below
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8583241
If you do have the patience, I would be very interested to know what you think of it.
:D! The change in rhythm in the ending lines really make them stand out, yaaaaay... hm I like it but it doesn't... like... jump out at me, yano? It seems more like an i needed to write this to comfort myself sort of poem, which is great buuut sometimes not as interesting for an outsider. :D~ Cora
Submission Name: PARTING SONG
