This is really powerful In this write you show others there is a way out of the darkness in your case it was the Love of another I really liked how you said she stopped all thorns and danger from preventing the beautiful rose from blooming Very Nicely said and Done God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
thats an amazing poem, im super glad shes helped u thru so much. im sorry i hurt u so bad. reading that brought tears to my eyes... ok, so they were running down my face and i cried so hard i couldnt read n e more, but im sorry.
Wow Rick I didnt know you had found love. Why didnt you tell me anything. Well it seems everyone can find it but me. Oh well I guess. I hope you have a great life with her and she treats good the way you need to be treated because you are truly a nice guy thats needs to be loved for your hurt that you have went through. You ahve suffered enough. Well best fo wishes and I send my love. Bye rick.
wow this must be the most amazing poem that i have ever read. im speachless i mean when i read it i got the chills and i couldnt stop smiling. i dont have anywords that could bring what i feel about this poem any justice. i cant believe it. gosh i really dont know what to say and i feel so stupid bc of it lol. i guess all i can say is that it is amazing but what can u expect when the writer is you. i love u rick.
What a sweet tribute. It's amazing how one person can change how you look at life and how you relate to things. I'm glad you've found someone to bring you a bit of light and happiness...everyone deserves it.
Reaching for this beauty I feel no thorns I can't feel pain I have become numb out of pain
The only thing I'd change it to stop the previous line with the word numb.... I think it has more power and will flow better into the next stanza.