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    dots Submission Name: Water, Bells, Wind, and Moondots
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    Author: Nirvana
    ASL Info:    13/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 138/204/63
    Words: 331
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWater, Bells, Wind, and Moondots
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    And the waves, the waves
    The crimson waves
    And the waves shall wash up
    The dead

    The bells are tolling, tolling, tolling
    The silver funeral bells toll
    Ever knowing, singing and
    Chiming and ringing and rhyming
    A sorrowful song that tells, tolls
    Of the shore running
    Red with blood
    Of the scarlet, crimson
    Waves, the stained and
    Bleeding waves
    Waves that wash up the dead.

    Weeping mother La Luna
    Fiery Father Sun
    Feasting eyes on the sight of the ocean
    Shore
    The running, bleeding, crying, deathly
    Shore, where the dead
    Will wash up evermore,
    Where the sad souls of each
    Lost body will wash up evermore.

    The blackest darkness and the brightest light
    The intense day and the intriguing night
    The truest of truths and the shiftiest lies
    All contained in a world where silver bells still toll
    Where the gentle winds still blow, blow, blow,
    Where the gentle, sighing, whispering
    Crying winds will forever blow
    Over the waters of an ocean ran through with blood
    Where the waves of the waters of the sea mix with
    Crimson blood
    Scarlet, ruby, red, crimson blood
    That bathes the dead, washed up on a lonely shore
    That will be lonely forevermore
    Kept company only by a forlorn bell
    Tolling out a deathly tune
    Keeping time with the waves, the wind, and the weeping of the moon
    Keeping time with the bloody, gory, morbid waves
    The sorrowful, crying, weeping, dying wind
    And the glowing, shining, breathing, sighing, sobbing of the moon.




    Submitted on 2006-06-12 21:41:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh. My. Freaking. God.
    I love this, it's so.........haunting, and beautiful, and tragic, and...jeez, I can't even form a coherent sentance right now. This has to be one of my favorites of your Leandra, it's breathtaking. I can't believe you still have the power to write like this, it's brilliant.


    On a slightly unrelated note, you should join the community I made on livejournal, it's for writing and things like that.


    -Gwen
    | Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]


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