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    dots Submission Name: Cry Babydots
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    Author: bonita2689
    ASL Info:    18/f/in
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 42/58/33
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 370



    Description:
       yea.. so im a whiner


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    dotsCry Babydots
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    I'm sulking in my rock star dreams,
    new guitar strings and music sheets

    My frown is catering to jumbled notes
    I use the lyrics for a word-beaten coax

    I'm sulking in my rock star dreams
    never ready, at only sixteen

    The sparkle in my eye dims as you see
    the rock star life never was for me




    Submitted on 2006-06-13 07:28:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well, I like it...

    I can see you sulking, a guitar in hand...decked out in your "rocker" clothes...hoping for a break that never seems to come.

    I think it is great...
    | Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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