Description: When i wrote this poem I was think of all the people who are starving and dying even in our own country. People who are hopeless we need to be shown that someone still cares about them. Did you know every 5seconds a child dies from hunger related causes
My heart keeps aching
My body won't stop shaking
My tears keep on breaking
As they hit the ground
I cry for those who have no home
No real place to call their own
I'm sick for those who are without hope
what can they do but sit and mope
I ache for all the sick
As with life plays on them
Its cruel and wicked tricks
To these we must show we care
with these we must love and share
Prove to them there is still good
Ask them if they kindly would
Fight with us this endless fight
So to others we may bring light
To reach more people that have no hope
With their troubles we must help them cope
So I pour out my heart to thee
Please here now my endless plea
To show someone you do care
Just be nice and always fair
And join us in our on going fight
To spread to all unending light
People do care about them, there are millions of foundations trying to help these staving people. Sooner of later I think that world will go under another depression, very quickly. But eh, I liked this piece, brought up an issue that people might forget ever now and then. But, people do care and think about these people who are suffering. Only so many can actually help, and make a difference. It takes a lot of power to change something like that, I mean there are ALYWAYS going to be people that are suffering, its life. Its how they and we deal with it that counts. Anywho nice piece, great opinion, good job. Take care!
This is good. It is sad that there are so many out there without a home, but rainbow is right. A lot do care about them and are doing all they can to help. But even if there are a lot of people trying to help, they can't help everyone. There's just to many. This is a good message to those who don't know about what's going on in this world, and also for the all the people who are without a home. Like you said, they do need to know that we do care about them. Great work.
Submission Name: Sheer Kindness
