Description: This is once again, all true, the closest I can get to writing my own feelings and actions is to be the third person.
The reading is a little different than most peices I have ever written as each small stanza is virtually self contained and stands alone without following the flow of the next
Reminded me of the U2 song Walk On. I enjoyed this piece for in a sense I can relate to the persona. I like the idea you mentioned in the description that each stanza is seperate in a sense and doesn't flow into the other. Yet while reading this I didn't really get that, they did seem connected to me in their own right.
Submission Name: walked away
