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    dots Submission Name: I will not lose you nowdots
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    Author: sunset
    ASL Info:    21/F/Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 76/46/32
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI will not lose you nowdots
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    In the sunlight of your eyes
    Close this day with a kiss
    You know every part of me
    You hold me with such clarity
    And I am naked before you
    I have nothing left to give you
    When you hold me close
    And tears rain from your eyes
    I know not of love or hate
    I do not understand your fear
    Inside I am screaming at you
    But my hands are helpless
    I will hold on to you
    And grip with my every breath
    So that I do not lose you
    Not today or any other
    I ask you to stay with me
    Through the nights and the day
    Because we are something special
    That cannot be ignored or explained
    We circle around our destiny
    And I will not lose you now




    Submitted on 2006-06-13 20:50:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love the title of this

    "I will not lose you now"
    It is so simple, strong, and desperate.

    The lines I like the best are
    "You hold me with such clarity"
    and
    "But my hands are helpless"

    I feel they are the most powerful.

    Well I'm sorry I'm not more helpful, but I did like the poem.

    ----kim
    | Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by chemberdan | [ Reply to This ]


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