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    dots Submission Name: Burning In Buildingsdots
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    Author: mrmundane
    ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47/96/78
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1267
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       It tells a story about passion and love and death and love after death and life, and yeah...


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    dotsBurning In Buildingsdots
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    lit candles are lighting the room we're in
    and the darkness looms until each one burns dim
    we kiss and our bodies can barely contain our love
    and our skin rubs together so hard we turn red
    across the floor and...
    my mind is spinning from the drugs i'm on
    and my heart is racing so fast
    I can feel it try to beat through our chests to be with yours
    and as is yours
    into mine, and...
    our shadows cast and drip and sway
    red velvet sheets and curtains are torn away
    and shredded
    they fall on the candles
    who are almost dead
    and ignite into flames
    and we lie there naked and together and our hearts
    escape our bodies forever and ever together
    as our bodies burst up in the smoke above buildings
    and eventually rain down into the sea
    on the grass and their clippings
    and other lovers together...
    burning in buildings




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