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    dots Submission Name: Lullabydots
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    Author: .:eVe:.
    ASL Info:    25/f/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 57/57/22
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Childrens
    Total Views: 130
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 389



    Description:
       I made this up as I was singing my baby girl to sleep. Luckily, she fell in love with it and now it's a ritual to sing this to her every night before bed. Something for her to pass on to her children. Crazy how that works.


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    dotsLullabydots
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    Close your eyes
    It's time for bed
    The Sun has gone to rest

    Yahua is watching over us
    Rest your weary head

    Good Night
    Sleep Tight
    It's time for bed
    Tomorrow will be new

    Good Night
    Sleep Tight
    Close your eyes

    Dream of peaceful dreams
    Dream of peaceful dreams




    Submitted on 2006-06-14 11:48:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awww... tiffy roo that's so cute! :D
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by MidnightMelody | [ Reply to This ]
      Close your eyes
    It's time for bed
    The Sun has gone to rest

    Yahua is watching over us
    Rest your weary head

    Good Night
    Sleep Tight
    It's time for bed
    Tomorrow will be new

    Good Night
    Sleep Tight
    Close your eyes

    Dream of peaceful dreams
    Dream of peaceful dreams

    Did you by any chance mean 'Yeshua' in the fourth line? If so, this bears a more than passing resemblance to several brief songs by the Beatles ("Golden Slumbers" and "Goodnight" come to mind), although it seems to lend itself to the rhythm of 'Brahm's Lullaby.' Perhaps my cynicism relating to children in the modern world is adding meaning where there may be none, but it seems sad that children should be reminded to dream peaceful dreams when it should be their natural condition to do so.

    In any case, nicely done.
    Take care.
    Bill.
    | Posted on 2006-07-19 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      its sweet and your voice makes it twice as nice. My mom used to always tell met that tomorrow was a new day so not to think about it tonight. I had lots of anxiety nightmares when I was a kids. I think that helped the most. I need a kid to sing to.
    | Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by parabola | [ Reply to This ]
      Thuis is really pretty
    I like how you let the child become more at peace by speaking of Yahua (God)
    And letting him know he is safe
    Very Beautiful
    I Loved This
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, nice one!

    I actually found myself singing this as I read, so it's perfect!

    well done

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]



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