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    dots Submission Name: must be nice (verse 3)dots
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    Author: unknown soldier
    ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 1348/1346/203
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsmust be nice (verse 3)dots
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    It must be nice having someone you know you belong with
    It could be someone you don’t get along with
    Or your bet friend who you’re sitting here singing this song with
    This is the person that you have to grow strong with
    You want it eternal so the lovers find ways to prolong it
    Must be nice to find somebody who loves you
    They’ll never fuck you
    Cuz you’re the special one that they wanna make love to
    Great conversation and all the kisses and hugs too
    They know your reputation but they’re still gonna trust you
    To that person, not even God is above you
    You can fight the feeling but it’s waiting to bust through
    Must be nice to have somebody bearing your seed
    They’re always there when you need
    Ready to provide care when you bleed
    I don’t need the money and fame since the love will suffice
    Yeah Lyfe, you were right, this love shit has gotta be nice

    Even when your life is going wrong
    She’ll be by your side still holding on
    Even when those 20s stop spinning
    And all those gold digging women disappear
    She’ll still be here




    Submitted on 2006-06-14 23:24:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey bubz this is a nice tribute, it flows well too, its nice to read some pretty words instead of [censored]ty words on here, so keep em cummin, its another one of ma faves.
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-06-15 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      u a fag real [censored]
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
      hey troy! im back!! this is harder than i thought! ok the flow is good!! seriously i can never find anything wrong with anything ur write! dang! u get on my nerves being so talented an [censored]! stupid [censored]!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-07-12 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      its a good ending. Your raps are better reads(mainly becuz of the topics i think) But you write about love sort of the same way i portray it in my sappy writes. So i cant hate on these. quick question.. Are you writing from first person experiences. Or is being in 'Love' a manifested idea you have similiar to mine. Thats a hard question to answer but i think u should answer it based on the views in these past three verses.
    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a way to wrap this up! I loved it! I again, could relate to the words. This was realisitc as well as to how love should be when it is real. I never heard of this Lyfe person, but I plan to find out what his music is like. You did a outstanding job Candyman. Another fav.

    Catrina
    | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      
    Even when your life is going wrong
    She’ll be by your side still holding on
    Even when those 20s stop spinning
    And all those gold digging women disappear
    She’ll still be here

    aiyo you couldnt have said it any better man..

    Thats all imma gonna say.. That was one sweet collection of rhyme and content FING PERIOD..

    Aiyo grab a map and you'll see you only about an hour south of my house.. I stay close to Alexandria and when I'm in LA im there all the time.. right now im in Cali, taking care of some s hit and staying my uncle..

    Peace and man that was some of the best s hit i have read on this site.. Forget the hip hop for a minute and take a second and realize what you just put down..

    Take it easy
    Cade
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
      They’ll never [censored] you
    Cuz you’re the special one that they wanna make love to
    Great conversation and all the kisses and hugs too
    They know your reputation but they’re still gonna trust you
    To that person, not even God is above you
    You can fight the feeling but it’s waiting to bust through
    Must be nice to have somebody bearing your seed

    I like that [censored].. I"m putting all three of these verses on my favorite list man... you did reall good man
    | Posted on 2006-06-22 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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