People need to realize it's okay to cry. And in many cases, it's okay. so i think maybe this poem needs to be mass produced, like a virus. show up in your email. call you up at 8 oclock in the morning like a telemarketer. pop up on every blackberry. hand delivered to your mailbox. and everyone would read this at the same time. and everyone would cry. a good cry. for everything that happened to them this week. and i bet it would be the purest, most beautiful bond the world has ever shared.
maybe i just got a little carried away. but it's so very true. and i wish more people (even myself) could look at crying in the same manner that you do.
It takes a certain kind of strength to be able to cry when you need to. I really enjoyed this poem alot. Most of the time I found myself thinking, good for you. I wish I could cry when I need to. Thanks for sharing, write on.
I do think in some situations the people who cry come out stronger than those who bottle it up. This is an original write, I've never read or thought about crying being something you couldn't live without. If you don't mind I have a suggestion concerning the first stanza. "Someone once asked me What one thing I couldn't live Without" doesn't make sense to me. I think either after "what" or after "without" you need to place was/is (depending on the tense). I enjoyed this write, and the ending touched me because of the truth in it; I could relate to it!