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    dots Submission Name: CHOICEdots
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    Author: Psyve
    ASL Info:    53/M/ Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 75/102/60
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    At this psychological moment,
    Curiously cut off from the gyrating frenzy around me,
    When all that remains
    Is a tantalising memory
    Of the cool roundness
    Of an upper arm
    Closely held on a darkened floor
    In some distant time past-
    Dark eyes under weighted lids,
    And a half-smile on an upturned face…
    I catch myself wondering:
    Just suppose…
    Given the choice again…
    Would I…?

    And then the girl across the table
    Leans over, bemused,
    Waves five fingers under my nose,
    And says: “ Dance?”
    …And the spell is broken…




    Submitted on 2006-06-15 06:58:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      HA!
    Sooo...a person who got knocked out of the trance of "what might have been".

    Nice way of putting it...and you did it well. Setting a little "dreamscape" and then...BOOOM!

    Reality waves its hand.

    Interesting write and thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-06-15 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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