Chili peppers and
time stopping and
Your lips on mine
I come alive.
You revitalize me.
More potent than smelling salts
That assaults my senses
And breaths life back
Into a vacationing heart.
While I annualize
The reviving touch of your lips to mine,
All you did was kiss me
| Such rich imagery. I really enjoyed reading this. It was really cute. The kisses that make the earth shatter, always a good subject for a poem.||| Posted on 2006-06-15 00:00:00 | by fabulousAMY | [ Reply to This ] || Wow! this is a great poem. I wish I wrote it.|
I have been writiing about kissing in my works from time to time. But I have never been kissed like that. maybe it'll happen for me one day.
Keep'em comming. Untill I read you again,
take care. The Poor Man's Poet.
|| Posted on 2006-06-15 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ] || I like the imagery as well, the earth shattering and what not. Chilipeppers and sledgehammers? I wouldn't have used those two analogies, but that is why I suppose we call it art, no?||| Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by St. Agatha | [ Reply to This ] |