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Shout It


Author: SilverLightning
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Words: 297
Class/Type: Lyrics /Religious
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When placed with the music I wrote for this song, it sounds remarkably like U2...but it needs a better chorus, I think...


Shout It



Take a look into the mirror,
Think about yourself,
Ask those self-inspecting questions,
About your soul's health.
Is your heart still in one piece,
Or have you sold it out to the world?
Do you still see the light on the horizon,
And the banners of the Lord?

'Cause I've seen people
Claim to live in life and peace,
But they fall into the way of the world...

So Shout it! If you're still strong,
Shout it! If you've been reconciled of your wrongs,
Shout it! From the highest mountains,
A declaration of God's love...
Shout it! Don't be shy, no,
Shout it! Let your voice fly, now,
Shout it! From the highest mountains,
A declaration of God's love...

America, the beautiful,
How far you've fallen.
You're people obsessed by political correctness,
And blocking out his word...
Living and dying and dreaming and crying,
All for their own desires,
This world is lead by the strong in speech,
And deceptive liars.

These are the people,
Who claim to live in life a peace,
But they have fallen into the way of the world...

So Shout it! If you're still strong,
Shout it! If you've been reconciled of your wrongs,
Shout it! From the highest mountains,
A declaration of God's love...
Shout it! Don't be shy, no,
Shout it! Let your voice fly, now,
Shout it! From the highest mountains,
A declaration of God's love...

You've gotta break the norm,
You've gotta shatter what's acceptable,
Walk the streets and declare your faith,
Shout it, Shout it...

Shout it...
Shout it...
Shout it...
Don't whisper...
Don't fear...
Don't worry what they'll think...
Just look into the mirror,
And shout it...




Submitted on 2006-06-15 19:48:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The second bridge's third line needs to be fixed.

America, the beautiful,
How far you've fallen.
You're people obsessed by political correctness,
And blocking out his word...
Living and dying and dreaming and crying,
All for their own desires,
This world is lead by the strong in speech,
And deceptive liars.

My favorite verse. Especially the 'living and dying and dreaming and crying' part.

You've got a talent... and your best writing seems to come out when you're talking about God. Big surprise. But keep it up.

- T o x i c R o s e

P.S. Fabulous job on Wednesday. It was funny when I messed up the beginning and made up random words.

=] And none of them made sense. I don`t think Hoerling and Helle and Gibson and Sherry noticed, though. Hooray.
| Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by Toxic Rose | [ Reply to This ]


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