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    dots Submission Name: Lostdots

    Author: eyes of bleu
    ASL Info:    15/f/TN
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 23/24/21
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 599
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 602

       I feel like crap...i'm pissed off...and everything freakin SUCKS

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    Everything i've tried to be
    Nothing was ever good enough
    Everything i've tried to see
    Caused my heart to become so rough

    I've tried to change
    But no one ever notices
    Nothing left to say
    But listen to the voices

    I feel so broken
    Empty in my head
    I wish my eyes would open
    Maybe I'd be better off dead

    There's no escape
    The feelings here to stay
    Life's my biggest mistake
    Maybe i'll get to leave today.....

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