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    dots Submission Name: Why?dots
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    Author: Kalinda
    ASL Info:    18/f/aussie
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 124/125/65
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 174
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    Why?

    Why is it that when you’re near
    My heart skips a beat?
    Why do I feel so alone
    Without you here?
    How can I risk my heart
    Without a hope?
    How can I tell you the truth
    Not knowing where to start?
    What can I say to show you
    All the things I feel?
    What will be that outcome
    Of my love for you?
    Why is it that every time we talk
    The hope in me grows?
    Why do I fall asleep every night
    With you in my dreams?
    How do you say so much to me
    Without saying a thing?
    How can I prove to myself
    You see what most can’t see?
    What do you truly feel
    When it comes to me?
    What might you know of the truth
    Are these feelings real?
    Why is it that when you’re near
    My heart skips a beat?
    Why do I feel so alone
    Without you here?




    Submitted on 2006-06-16 04:01:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked your poem very much. The flow was good and the meter was okay but needed a little work.

    A good read. Glen
    | Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by usglen | [ Reply to This ]
      why must the clouds disapear
    when you are so near?
    why does this hurt vanish
    when you are just a wish?
    Why do I love you in a such
    when you have not done to much?

    loved your poem here and I hope this person you refering to gets to read it, cause I think that person would be blushing
    | Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by thelastone | [ Reply to This ]



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