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    dots Submission Name: Goodbyedots
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    Author: Xx_bang_bang_
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 23/24/19
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
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    Description:
       Goodbye - Song
    I wrote this for my dad.


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    dotsGoodbyedots
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    I remember when ‘we’ became ‘me’
    When four became three
    A family broken apart
    Leaving a hole in my heart
    A forever open tare
    Something even time can’t repair


    Goodbye is the hardest thing to say
    I wish you could’ve stayed another day
    To hold you again and never let go
    To bad this can’t be so
    This love in my heart
    Will keep you alive


    I reach out to hold your hand
    But I feel nothing hold mine back
    Such a shock to hear you’d gone
    Secretly I still mourn
    When I was scared you’d hold me tight
    Now all I can do is stand up and fight

    A daughter without her father
    A little princess without her daddy
    Growing up without my dad
    I'm forever your little girl at heart
    I will be strong for you




    Submitted on 2006-06-16 04:25:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh wow! that's so sad! i loved it! great job on these lyrics! :)
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      First of all, thanks for commenting on my poem. I appreciate it. I like these lyrics. I've had these feelings as well when someone I loved passed away. I like these lyrics, I think that you should write more. It's a good way to express yourself and of course you might provide inspiration to others.
    | Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by riki_nl | [ Reply to This ]



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