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Author: nuttyginna
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Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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I wrote this for my mate-I love her, but I'm not gay or anything, it's just a friend luv. Yeah-hope you like it!!


You



You’re sensitive,
you’re smart,
You’re beautiful too.
You’re gorgeous and cute,
And I luv you.

I really mean it,
so please don’t smile,
Just for you,
I would run a mile.

Cause you’re my mate,
And always will be,
And you are just
As crazy as me.

So Becky Burns,
Just be you,
Cause we’ll support
Whatever you do!




Submitted on 2006-06-16 06:08:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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