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    dots Submission Name: TEACH YOU ROCK 'N' ROLLdots
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    Author: Psyve
    ASL Info:    53/M/ Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 75/102/60
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 878
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 922



    Description:
       This one was written as a simple 12-bar BLUES piece. Nothing deep to be read into the Lyric...Just a fun piece to play and sing along....


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    dotsTEACH YOU ROCK 'N' ROLLdots
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    I say I am no gambler and she says: you wanna quit?
    I say I've never played before and she says: why don’t you just come and sit
    By me, mama? Why don’t you just come and sit and watch my game…
    See me as I rumble, watch me as I call,
    Catch me take a tumble on a calculated fall:
    If you learn to do this right, Hon' ,
    By God, I'm gonna teach you Rock 'n' Roll !


    She says I've got to be there with my money-
    I ask her will I know the game and when?
    She says: I'm gonna teach you if it takes me all night, Honey,
    So until then, oh until then…
    You wanna be a cruiser, you gotta play a folder
    So that you never lose her, you've gotta learn to hold her
    If you play your cards right, Honey,
    By mornin' I'll have taught you Rock 'n' Roll !




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    ||| Comments |||
      Like most of my lyrics on this board, this one was originally written as a song and, should you care to, you can hear me perform it by clicking on the link below

    http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8875183

    If you do have the patience, I would be very interested to know what you think of it.

    Psyve
    | Posted on 2010-04-16 00:00:00 | by Psyve | [ Reply to This ]


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