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Sick&Tired


Author: DontLetGo421
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118 /238 /141
Words: 163
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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yeah..im feeling like that sorta.


Sick&Tired



sick and tired of trying
i have swollen eyes again from crying
dont you see you just keep on lying
you see the smiles but inside im dying

once again another cold night
you promised me that everything was alright
alls i can see are the sheets ; lying pure white
just another day; another beautiful fright

lying here reckless;unsure what to do
i usually have a voice; just not around you
you leave me again; leave me for your crew
i'll lie here till morning; among mornings dew

i just cant keep up;i cant go on
you tell me its right but whys it feel so wrong
youll just leave again and be gone so long
how about i move on and just be gone

let me have a voice; let me be heard
sick of being shadowed; im no longer scared
this is the day you all have feared
the day i move on;lets see who cared




Submitted on 2006-06-16 21:48:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  raged from your fights
all cared just said "mights"
no truth ever from your light
Quilt shines when you act right

this is a fav peace
| Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]
  it's an okay piece. I like the ending verse alot, but the rest kind of lacked something for me. Plus, the rhyming definitely seemed forced, and happened too often.
| Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by hybridsongwrite | [ Reply to This ]


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