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Bubblewrap Baby


Author: angelfyre
ASL Info:    17/yes please/here
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 254 /238 /76
Words: 229
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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lord...havent written anything in ages. well....my favorite person in the world told me that he was afraid if he didnt use his gift of words, he might lose it. i think i might be losing it. oh well...


Bubblewrap Baby


Every button on my floor won’t hold me together.
From tomorrow to tonight I can try.
Try to see through this nightmare.
Struggle to identify the passing time.

One more.
Just one more.
Then I can be with my bubble wrap baby.
Safety baby that will hold me still.
My only heart that keeps me safe
Is the only heart that snaps my neck.

Broken strings and straws with holes.
Swings and cards and hands with goals.
Forty winks won’t hold me together.
Slang ailments explain to my eyelids
That I must stall.
Center of the universe,
The beginning and end of my world...
Will be here eventually.

One more.
Just one more.
Then I can be with my bubble wrap baby.
Safety baby that will hold me still.
My only heart that keeps me safe
Is the only heart that snaps my neck.

This perversion of my heart keeps me strong.
Wanting something so hard to obtain.
Deviant lovers.
My soul twin.
Rests his eyes under my open lids.
Rest easy my beloved.
My God will catch my fallen tears,
Make my forsaken heart resurrect.

One more.
Just one more.
Then I can be with my bubble wrap baby.
Safety baby that will hold me still.
My only heart that keeps me safe
Is the only heart that snaps my neck.




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  Every button on my floor won’t hold me together.
From tomorrow to tonight I can try.
Try to see through this nightmare.
Struggle to identify the passing time.

(no use in identifying the time, cause its just time wasted, not cause you want to waste it, cause the world is too [censored]ed up right now, to do anything else...do not pressure yourself too hard to smile, just feel the pain and the stress and know that everything will be perfect in the end, believe in the time after the clock drops and cracks in two)

One more.
Just one more.
Then I can be with my bubble wrap baby.
Safety baby that will hold me still.
My only heart that keeps me safe
Is the only heart that snaps my neck.

(The greatest triumph, the greatest happiness, can also spell disaster, by such prolonged absense, and painful words of anykind, tradegy..ofcourse)

Broken strings and straws with holes.
Swings and cards and hands with goals.
Forty winks won’t hold me together.
Slang ailments explain to my eyelids
That I must stall.
Center of the universe,
The beginning and end of my world...
Will be here eventually.

(everything is disjointed right now, understandably...as it is elsewhere too, yep..but it will all be worth it, all evil, all shrouded pain, will be found out, and dispersed with, soon enough)

One more.
Just one more.
Then I can be with my bubble wrap baby.
Safety baby that will hold me still.
My only heart that keeps me safe
Is the only heart that snaps my neck.

This perversion of my heart keeps me strong.
Wanting something so hard to obtain.
Deviant lovers.
My soul twin.
Rests his eyes under my open lids.
Rest easy my beloved.
My God will catch my fallen tears,
Make my forsaken heart resurrect.

(your crying eyes, and sweltering heart will vanquish any disease, that your beloved has felt, he probably knows that, his god, cries these tears on open blankets, and sleeps with only the most beautiful, true, acheavable things in mind)

One more.
Just one more.
Then I can be with my bubble wrap baby.
Safety baby that will hold me still.
My only heart that keeps me safe
Is the only heart that snaps my neck.

(please be calm, drift noiselessly, be a stone immortal, crack the smothering walls, and fill the sinking floor with hardened sand, be brave, be yourself, be indestructable, and patient)
| Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by Reckoner | [ Reply to This ]


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