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    dots Submission Name: Propaganda Signsdots
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    Author: ParanoidParadox
    ASL Info:    22/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 89/90/40
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPropaganda Signsdots
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    Get born
    Get busy
    Get hired
    Get paid
    Get laid
    Get hitched
    Get hurt
    Get divorced
    Get killed
    Get buried
    Get mourned
    Get forgotten




    Submitted on 2006-06-18 09:56:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really good concept. It's not the way I would have gone about it, but it's not my poem. So yeah. I like it.

    I assume the idea behind this is that the world just sort of puts up these signs for us and we must yield to them? Very cool.

    There wasn't much imagery, but it got me to thinking and that's what art is all about. Kudos.
    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by alexanderharm | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure if this is supposed to be political, or even if it has anything to do with propaganda. Even though the repitition was slightly tiresome, it didn't detract too much from the overall idea of the poem. It's like a snapshot of life, and how people go from one stage to the next with out actually thinking about the present...the poem reads as if it is rushed, which is an appropriate parallelism between the words and the way people rush through their lives. simple and nicely done
    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]
      i read it and i was like BUMMER life suxxx.

    cool its simple and easy and strait up
    cool rite
    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      What type of poem is this? There is no rhyme scheme, no rhythym or any flow. You also used the word "get" to many times.

    I felt that way just because that is the way the poem made me react when I read it. The use of the word "get" repeatedly distracted me from realizing what the poem was really about.

    Propoganda can be defined as chiefly derogatory information of a biased or misleading nature, used to promote or publicize a particular political cause or political point of view.

    Where is the political cause that you are promoting? Where is the derogatory information?
    These are just my comments and don't take them hard.
    USGlen
    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by usglen | [ Reply to This ]
      Short but sweet, in its own little way. Nice way of expressing how the media can piss you off! Rings true sadly. This one strikes a feeling of depression into me. The advertisements of alcohol, smokes, drugs, sex and things, not only on signs, but in movies. I really do think its sad. Nice job expressing it.
    | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ]


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