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    dots Submission Name: ALONE SHE WALKSdots
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    Author: Ligeia83
    ASL Info:    23/f/the literary world
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 17/14/13
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 158
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    dotsALONE SHE WALKSdots
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    Alone she walks-
    solemn-triumphant
    Marching to the light
    -Light on her head-
    Tears-in her eyes

    Alone she walks-
    Alone-I
    Towards the Sea of Light
    Towrads-Loneliness
    I cannot reach her.

    Alone she walks-
    Far- away-
    Cold-Ice on her hands.
    Tears-in my eyes.
    Solitude aches.

    Alone she walks-
    No one can reach her.
    In the depth of her meanings
    She alone can dwell
    And I am doomed-Eternally.

    Alone she walks-
    No one can see her
    No one can hear her
    Picture-out of Time-
    Venturing on distant Lands.

    Alone she walks-
    Solitude-Loneliness-
    Black skies-
    A multitude of white flies
    And I cannot reach her.

    Alone she walks-
    I cannot understand you-
    Maybe because
    It is me I refuse to comprehend
    For it hurts-it hurts.

    Alone she walks-
    I fail-to understand
    -To comprehend
    Oh End!The End
    There she comes-radiant-Sun.

    Alone she walks-
    Nevermore-Human Eyes
    On her-A look-
    On her-no weight-
    I wish I could follow.

    Alone she walks-
    Back for good-for better for worse
    Will you marry me?
    For I fail to comprehend
    What lies behind all this...



















    Submitted on 2006-06-18 13:56:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow that was really deep i liked how it shows how at times you just feel useless
    | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by lexdakid265 | [ Reply to This ]



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