SENSELESS by Ligeia83

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Submission Name: SENSELESS dots

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Author:	Ligeia83
ASL Info:	23/f/the literary world
Elite Ratio:	2.76 - 17/14/13
Words:	46

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	221
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	345

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SENSELESS dots

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It surrounds-
A sound; The Sound-
It surrounds-

I cannot see-
My face-Your face
I cannot see

My heart-My lungs
I cannot breathe-
My heart-My lungs-

It is you- a sound
I cannot hear-
Let me collapse;

Please, let me relapse

Submitted on 2006-06-18 14:55:48 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
this is a lovely poem and you have your won style of words that helps you relax as you write, this is a fanatic writing and I see that you only used words that weren't rythming....well I liked it for the most part and it is a wonderful poem....

later
GMann
| Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by Gmann | [ Reply to This ]
Lovely poem, the thing about your poems i noticed is you have your very own style and i like that about your poems:)
| Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by Mr. Creep | [ Reply to This ]

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