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    dots Submission Name: Subway Series(sinceer diss)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 1084
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1015
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 6233



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       its been a while but im back...ya kno what it is
    "GET EM"


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    dotsSubway Series(sinceer diss)dots
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    (intro-prison guard)
    "welcome to D-LAW...one thing i do have to tell you before you enter is that the state has a no hostage policy,in the likely event you are takin hostage the state will not negioate your relase in exchange for the release of an inmate"



    i'll fuckin produce a hundred hits dont matter who the fuck im runnin with
    after a hundred fifths i'll fuckin mumble hits straight narcotic i'll numb ya favorites list
    fuck a national tresuare muthafucka im-a gift while yalls victorys still remain a myth-
    dont blame the diss that your name doesnt exist-aint my fault ya pissed ya missed
    everybody got something to hide from me,so to who ever has lied to me
    everything you tried to hide a way will find a way to blind my day till i find my way
    your just a crime a way of giving your life away so put that knife away stay around another night or day
    ive just been threw alot more so give me the right of way or i'll egnite ya day-deadly cuz the mic likes to spray
    at anything critics like to write an say its all night an day when it comes to what they like to say
    you just know me from a hole in the wall,please i'll leave a hole in the wall,put a hole in yall
    please you aint buy out the whole mall ya budget so small,no call no cell but always need to make a phone call
    i'll silence ya vocals-native of my territory so stop fuckin with the locals
    been around for some years or two i'll leave ya peers packin a few- with a rap or two
    you actor you i'll smack at you listin to my diss track and play it back for you
    say i offend you when the track is threw watch em react and sue cuz the facts were true
    when the plastic blasts at you thats the last of you make sure ya caskets matchin you-BLACK AND BLUE
    who the fuck is backin you when im attackin you-you better be packin 2 cuz im jackin your crew
    i'll go to bat for those who true so get ya team up im the hardest player in the league battin clean-up
    get beemed up seamed up from ya jeans up i'll put my fees up before i put my feet up an green up
    you divorced from the industry shoulda gotta pre-nup,im everything the game needs -far behond anything you could dream up
    you stole 'compulsive heights' from prolifik an tried to make it your own till D-LAW came threw -scared ya into a 'new era'
    the 'white lady' aint your only bad habbit-battlin just quit at it you faggot
    dont get mad the song is rude you messin wit the wrong dude my victory is long over due
    so what it do?you gotta another song or two ?dont rush it dude 2 in 2 days an im still crushin you
    a quick death you just choosin your fate-you aint gettin rid of 'weight' only in the gym when you sheddin weight one more fuckin diss ill show you heavens gate,my overwhelming wins you shall never debate- you try to bring it again ill show you seven or eight im on the clock twenty four seven-im never late
    wanna talk tough-stupid ass ive had enough-you wanna go 8 million words with 50 fuckin chorus's and a thousand fuckin hooks-hows it the "closing chapter" when i came back WON then you release 2 more?
    you drama whore-you barley makin the tournament-while ima constant final four
    its a fact that your relaseing more but that doesnt mean your career doesnt belong beneath the floor
    when my lyrics hit its hard to keep your feet on the floor im just gettin started and you already reachin for the door -open up to chapter one as i preech a little more-rip it at ya character just a little more(gunshots)fuck you reachin for im aimin for the middle more to get rid of this whore
    always talkin bout some chick-always gotta be talkin bout fuckin some bitch that i apparently ran with apparently held hands with,we aint even on the same frequency level check ya bandwidth- ill come up with so many punches you wont kno what i'll land with,whatever weapons you an ya bandits brandish ill damage ya hands with so you wont be able to land fists- i'll damage ya damn wrists- take whats on ya mans wrist
    just for you bragging your on every fans list
    so lets go- here comes the hex tho your just about to be the next ho it effects yo
    why aint you tell em bout the time i desroyed you on the metro?you homo sexual-im runnin you outta D.C.like lavar arrington-i had the battle won from vienna to new carolton
    from virginia to southern maryland-with a victory im right there again
    better step it up if you wanna join the major leagues-you rookie- why dont you let em know how D-LAW has 'new era' under seige?tried to teach you in 'D-LAW 101' but you barley pullin C's while i graduated a long time ago passin with A's and B's runnin with crazy G's while you were just learning your A-.B-.C's-these lyrics are just to fine so take the time an savor these-rareties-welcome to my mind-but sign this wavier please-you enter at your own risk-just know this-look how i got this ho pissed threw out this wholeeeeeee diss
    you cower in rhymes had to step back and realize the power is mine-your bout to be the next to have his shoes hung from power lines

    (chorus-D-LAW)
    its addicting,no medicine can cure the pain i continue inflicting
    its just like ya favorite drug-but you cant sniff these lines
    a sharpshooter i dont miss with rhymes-you just missed this time
    from the westside of my avenue-i aint gonna have it dude the public just aint havin you
    i know its been a while but its clear ima win by a mile-cuz you cant keep up with anything in my pro-file
    you outta place in this game-you tryin to go to war with a pocket knife-please be careful with ya life

    (outro-D-LAW)
    subway series man...this shit aint goin 7 games tho haha...bring out the brooms you bout to get SWEPT
    haha...its over man...D-LAW the world champ come on nowwwww...1998 type shit...yall know what it is





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      I DONT GET IT. I LIKED IT, BUT I DIDNT LIKE IT. I think you could have used more detail, or word-play. BE CLEVER, NOT IGNORANT.
    | Posted on 2006-07-04 00:00:00 | by Logic | [ Reply to This ]
      wow slow down boi! your trailz r blazin behind, that was right up there with the kingz of lyrics, i loved it, im having that!
    shae
    | Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by shae_indauk | [ Reply to This ]
      i fuq wit the lyrics. but ya style has been done and played wit. its gonna take some deeper [censored] to get on my level wit the FAV posts 'frequency'. But hey... KEEP doin what you doin, do you.. Being a fav pick isnt for everyone. Battle rap is fun but my words im sure hurt you worse then a 'pocket knife'. And on the metro u used the word knife to rhyme with wife. no need to say anything else....HA
    | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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