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    dots Submission Name: True Hatedots
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    Author: Ensult
    ASL Info:    19/Male/New York
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 115/114/31
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsTrue Hatedots
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    Out of all the white tadpoles that you fought against to be given life
    Why did you have to make of it?
    If it were up to me I would have knocked you down with the rest of us
    It's so sad how you and I share the same mother
    Two opposites that excited the same wound 14 years apart
    Who could of known that one would hate the other so much
    How ironic
    To call you my enemy
    would mean that I would be given you a title that involves my being
    I don't praise you I belittle you
    I don't sympathize with you I pity you
    To be honest I hate you




    Submitted on 2004-05-13 21:59:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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