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    Author: Restless_Heart
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 44/35/16
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Hmm...I'm not sure what I was thinking at this time...it was a while ago so.. gimme your best shot.


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    Blood still flows from hands unattended,
    Wounds open and people uncaring,
    Left alone, far from anywhere,
    Not as easy to see something thats not there,
    But when I stand you should recognize,
    That I am the one thats already dead inside,

    I feel, when I fall, everything around,
    stronger than appears,
    Especially when shes near,
    Can't help but hate, all thats in life,
    Fore theres nothing worth giving up her life,
    Death is nothing for those with no fear.

    Challenging your thoughts, your beliefs,
    If you can't defend them, why keep them?
    Same goes for the people in your life,
    I can't protect you all, so I'll teach you my methods,
    So you won't feel weak,so they won't have the chance,
    Beat them before they beat you,

    Something, that with me you can do,
    I fight for knowledge,I fight for life,
    Anymore I live to teach,
    To protect you so you can protect me,
    I already know that I'm my own adversary,

    If I die,
    You'll be the one who couldn't save me,
    From myself, I have too many worries,
    But, no worries, no fear,
    Cause I'm the one still here,
    Until you can't save me.




    Submitted on 2006-06-19 01:02:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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