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    dots Submission Name: NODNOL PART IIdots
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    Author: Ligeia83
    ASL Info:    23/f/the literary world
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 17/14/13
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I wrote the second part of NodnoL while at a conference in my university...I was sitting there with two friends of mine and the words just came out of my head...


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    dotsNODNOL PART IIdots
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    Gloomy-Gray skies
    Never cease to-
    (Worn out)-exist
    released-with no escape
    And NodnoL takes me over-
    Takes you over-
    Endlessly-
    Not the same you are-
    Yet the same you seem.
    Covered in dust
    My Lungs-do not breathe
    I can't-I can't
    Do not exist
    (Worn out-Exhausted)
    Everyone's here-
    but you- and myself
    357-357-357
    Numbers spinning in my head-
    I surrender-
    And NodnoL takes me over-
    359-359-359
    Three fifty-nine
    Not here-Not there
    Not here-Not there
    It is more or less
    the same sound-unbound
    Repeats itself-
    over and over
    Endlessly
    Break the fetters
    And take her away-
    403 403 403
    Endless Time
    Never leaves me alone-
    And NodnoL takes me over-
    Oppressing-Gloomy-
    Gloomy-Oppressing
    405 405 405
    Room-I need- MORE
    Space-to breathe
    Diamonds-
    Don't want ANY!
    408 408 408
    Do not make a sound
    The work begins-
    You-Not here-
    So Where? And When?
    Only one word...
    Please...Stay...
    For NodnoL takes me over-
    Ceaseless-
    Unrestful-
    Mad-Mad-Mad
    Why are you so...far?
    NodnoL never stops-
    Take over-and over-and over
    I've had enough of it-
    Of You-
    Don't want to understand-
    No more-
    Not even you can understand
    Not even you...
    You cannot cross the line-
    My line-
    Close to-but never will
    Free me-from my fetters-
    And NodnoL kills me-
    A voice I hear
    Too close-too near
    A voice-Your Death.




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