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    dots Submission Name: FACESdots
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    Author: Ligeia83
    ASL Info:    23/f/the literary world
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 17/14/13
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1138



    Description:
       This too came out at the conference...it must have really saddened me!


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    dotsFACESdots
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    Faces,faces,all around me
    Nothing-I see-but you.

    Faces-Faces surround me
    Watch-Yours
    Nothing-
    Will I ever see you cross
    -That door- Again?

    Will I ever see you?
    Again-No more

    Faces-faces
    I scream-
    You cannot hear
    Fear-Fear-Fear
    Is
    Fear-Fear-Fear-is Fear...

    Will you walk
    That door again?
    Will you find
    A meaning-
    To-my-meaningless-Dreams...

    A scream- I hear
    It's all-so-SURREAL.

    The air I breathe
    Won't cease to kill me
    Suffocate-
    Dust-Down my throat

    Will you walk
    That door again?
    Can you really-Understand
    When will you be back?

    Will you ever?
    Will you ever?

    Faces all around me-
    They do not understand-
    Bird without wings-
    Soul without meaning
    Like my Dreams.

    Faces all around me,
    In the stillness of the night
    And you are-

    GONE




    Submitted on 2006-06-19 10:37:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was really good sounds like you dont like to be alone but these words were put together so some readers could take the thought many ways

    goog write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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