Do U Like It Like This
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alright this is the rough draft to my song. Any Advice tell me please. I don't want to change the feel of the song i just need a few pointers on how u think this song could better itself
Do U Like It Like This
(spoken) baby come here sit down i know you had a long day lay back...and relax.. and tell me do u like it like... this (verse) baby come here (come here) baby take your seat (take your seat) tonight is differnt from the rest you'll experince ecstasy I need you to relax as i kiss you from head to toe other nights are hard and fast tonight we'll go nice and slow as i take off your clothes does this turn you on we'll make beatiful music tonight i'ma make a brand new song i'm siting on your lap slowly pushing you back as i start it with a kiss baby do you like it like this (Bridge) take your time tonight your mine not stress tonight i'ma relax your mind take it slow let me know and tell me (chours) do u like it like this let me kiss you to the floor any way that you want it ride ya real slow let me know that u want this and do u like it like this i'ma show u i'm in love baby showin u so much love its for you and do u like it this i'll give it anyway that u need cater 2 u baby (oh oh) but do u like it like this makeing love to you all night as i'm singing you this song it's for you baby (Verse 2) as the water hits our skin this feels to good to be good it's the sweetest sin oh let me rub all over your body oh oh showing u why u chose me oh my lips on you nothing amiss no other girl can do u like this.... they can't kiss you from head to toe and this postion they don't know back to the basics is fine i know you like 69... but baby do u like it like this (Bridge) take your time tonight your mine not stress tonight i'ma relax your mind take it slow let me know and tell me (chours) do u like it like this let me kiss you to the floor any way that you want it ride ya real slow let me know that u want this and do u like it like this i'ma show u i'm in love baby showin u so much love its for you and do u like it this i'll give it anyway that u need cater 2 u baby (oh oh) but do u like it like this makeing love to you all night as i'm singing you this song it's for you baby |
Submitted on 2006-06-19 17:58:21 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| this was ok i wouldnt change any words though i am not sure what music category it falls in though i wouldnt say explicit or rock maybe a pop song anywaz well done sandman | Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ] | i bet ur boyfriend's pretty happy with u. lol. yeah i think this would be a really good song even though they couldn't even play it on the radio. | | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | That was AMAZING! I loved it. It was a great song. | <3 Adalae | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ] | i thought it was Good. IT started out reall slow but then verse 2 really stepped it up. AS a song wit the right beat and melody to the lyrics it could be a good song. | Do you sing by the way?? PC | Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ] | Wow! I can just see a video for this play in my mind. Talk about sexy! I loved the lyrics. I can't see anything to change really. I personally hear a fast song when I read this, with a mix of slow and fast dance moves. Great R&B feel. Now all you have to do is give Lil' John or Snoop a call. | Catrina | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ] | |
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