Description: I wrote this a while ago, and I think it has a bit of a tune to it, It's about a year old, to tell the truth.
What do you think? I was in a bit of a non-mood when I wrote it, and I couldn't feel anything, but I kept having static noise in my brain and in my ears that drowned out the music I play in the background.
I think it's good to see you write like this. you always hold in what you're thinking, and I think when you write like this, it gets those things out, even if it is a little painful. I like the chorus-like staza that is written twice:
LIKE A THOUSAND BULLETS TO YOUR BRAIN THEY'RE ALL DRIVIN YOU INSANE IN AND OUT REALITY FADES UNTIL IT FINALLY GOES AWAY
that one.
Just a little technical advice, though, take down all the caps, because they get a little annoying after awhile. Other than that, good write. Wishing for more ~Brian
Submission Name: Fade Away
