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    dots Submission Name: Joydots
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    Author: stilts
    ASL Info:    17/unsure/planet earth
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 714
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    Bytes: 548



    Description:
       a celebration of the passing of every bitch in my life... praise ya Jah


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    dotsJoydots
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    Exhilaration, a glow from within
    Laughter, like a bubbling stream inside.
    Joy- so much joy can't hide the smile.
    A dance enters your head,
    Your feet, waist, whole body begin to move,
    Moving to the beat in your head
    That no one else can hear.
    Decked in somber colours,
    They look at you in sheer horror,
    "Is she for real?"
    Dizziness from a hapiness and a freedom
    So often deprived-
    And given in such generous dosages at
    The death of la chienne.




    Submitted on 2006-06-20 15:53:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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