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a song to remember


Author: shootingstar
ASL Info:    22/f/hell
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Words: 486
Class/Type: Lyrics /Lostfriend
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this was written for a friend. this is not my work but the work of a friend and he wrote it to be read so i thought i'd put it up here


a song to remember



This song, goes out
To everybody who knows best
What its like, to forget the happy ending
Because youre so caught up, in tragic stories

This song, goes out
To the ones who lived in the moment
Right up to their last breath
Never wasting a day
Never wasting away

18 years is way too young
To disappear forever
I said to myself as i wrote these words down
When all you have is a moment
Take it and hold on
Because you might not get to say goodbye (goodbye)

When there are no more second chances
The clocks run out
But its too many years too soon
How did it happen? (how did it happen?)
How did it happen? (how did it happen?)
Now my worlds turned upside down
My smile turns to a frown
Its a chain reaction
How could it happen? (happen)

The fatal crash
The death of a friend
And by the time i finally realize
The tears slowly fill up my eyes
Its not for me to decide
Who deserves to live and to die
But if i could have i wouldve saved him
If i could i would have....

When there are no more second chances
The clocks run out
But its too many years too soon
How did it happen? (how did it happen?)
How did it happen? (how did it happen?)
now my worlds turned upside down
My smile turns to a frown
Its a chain reaction
How could it happen? (happen)
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Spoken:

sometimes i wonder if Gods just teaching us a lesson when a life
is taken away, and sometimes i wonder why life is the price we must pay,
all the sorrow that comes from tragedy, all the pain from loss, all the
suffering caused by the fact that there was no second chance for those
that actually deserved it, the ones who couldve done great things but
instead were cut down in the prime of life, to become just a saddened
memory in the hearts of those that were touched by that person, is that
justice? I dont think so. what is the point when no lesson is learned
and people get hurt, and happiness is replaced with sorrow and
depression, is that justice? i dont think so....

Whens theres no more second chances
The clocks run out
But its too many years too soon
How did it happen? (how did it happen?)
How did it happen? (how did it happen?)
Now my worlds turned upside down
My smile turns to a frown
Its a chain reaction
How could it happen? (happen)

Spoken:

carry the memory with you in your heart always
dont let them become just another faded picture on the wall
live for the moment.....

(dedicated to shane koch, who deserved a second chance)
written by steve maiocchi




Submitted on 2006-06-20 19:35:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  aiyo this was some deep s hit. Gets you thinking about whats going on in life.. Its hard when somebody dies young, as I have lost a few, in my arms on the streets.. I really enjoyed the spoken part of this piece.. Really touching


Tell your friend he did a great job
| Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
  I have to agree with Solemnpen; tell your friend that this write is fantastic. And I'll add it to my favs, just to let you know I like this.

This is indeed a song to remember.
| Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]


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