unknowingly

Author: Mr. Creep ASL Info:    16. Female. Here Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96 /177 /112 Words: 67

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unknowingly

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Candy coatted knife will you take my shattered life? kiss the shallow pain that's implanted in my brain set free the moarning sun, unleash the broken one and tell her that she is pretty hope you dont smell like pitty for she is doomed to death if you dont give her one last breath now take away the knife before she takes away her life..

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i like the line "candy coated knife" kind of potrays a kind sweet death thanks

| Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by deadbeat sun | [ Reply to This ]

hey, i like this!

| Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by samantha jetkin | [ Reply to This ]

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