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Author: Mr. Creep
ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96 /177 /112
Words: 67
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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These thoughts just randomly hit my head so i put them all into a poem:)


Candy coatted knife
will you take my shattered life?
kiss the shallow pain
that's implanted in my brain
set free the moarning sun,
unleash the broken one
and tell her that she is pretty
hope you dont smell like pitty
for she is doomed to death
if you dont give her one last breath
now take away the knife
before she takes away her life..

Submitted on 2006-06-20 20:38:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like the line "candy coated knife"
kind of potrays a kind sweet death
| Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by deadbeat sun | [ Reply to This ]
  hey, i like this!
| Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by samantha jetkin | [ Reply to This ]

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