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    dots Submission Name: unknowinglydots
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    Author: Mr. Creep
    ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
    Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96/177/112
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 994
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    Bytes: 421



    Description:
       These thoughts just randomly hit my head so i put them all into a poem:)


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    dotsunknowinglydots
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    Candy coatted knife
    will you take my shattered life?
    kiss the shallow pain
    that's implanted in my brain
    set free the moarning sun,
    unleash the broken one
    and tell her that she is pretty
    hope you dont smell like pitty
    for she is doomed to death
    if you dont give her one last breath
    now take away the knife
    before she takes away her life..




    Submitted on 2006-06-20 20:38:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like the line "candy coated knife"
    kind of potrays a kind sweet death
    thanks
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by deadbeat sun | [ Reply to This ]
      hey, i like this!
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by samantha jetkin | [ Reply to This ]


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